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hetalia2011-01-05 08:26 pm
sliefoxx.livejournal.com) wrote in hetalia2011-01-05 08:26 pm
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French speaker?
Hello. I am writing fic. I was hoping a French-speaker could help me write a small part of dialog. It's literally, three lines. I'm sure Google messed it up since it had problems with the word "speak".
If there is a better community for this, please let me know.
“Je veux m'adresser à vous.” Francis said as softly as he could.
A few men glared at him. They had taken Francis’ chosen language as an insult.
Arthur pursed his lips, “Que voulez-vous?” he hissed back.
“Pour. Parler. Avec. Vous.” Francis tugged on Arthur’s sleeve.
Intended dialog:
"I want to speak with you."
"What do you want?"
"To. Speak. With. You."
If there is a better community for this, please let me know.
“Je veux m'adresser à vous.” Francis said as softly as he could.
A few men glared at him. They had taken Francis’ chosen language as an insult.
Arthur pursed his lips, “Que voulez-vous?” he hissed back.
“Pour. Parler. Avec. Vous.” Francis tugged on Arthur’s sleeve.
Intended dialog:
"I want to speak with you."
"What do you want?"
"To. Speak. With. You."
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