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Title: Die Mine Enemy
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pt_sock_acct
Character(s) or Pairing(s): FRUK, America
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Mention of deth and murder! also sexxorz
Summary: Ather meets Frence's ghost
i'm new and i LOOOOOOOVE fruk!! my friend just sent me their youtube videos what a waster a few days ago!! i dont like much else countries hmm lets think i love china, russia and i love romeano. i also TOTALLY LOVE HERR GERMANY cuz my dad is a huge fan. neway i knowu guyz may not apparecate china/russia slash lol so ive written something for u all!
it is called 'die mine enemy' and it is about fruk. enjoy!11
oh and im sorry about my spelling cuz i kind of alwys get excited near the end of my stories and i dont haev a beta! and if any of u guysz like lotr fic u should check out my other work!neway im gonna write lotsmore about this i may even write a sequel so hey its nice to meet you all!
Arthur sat by the ocean and looked at the stars. He recited apoem by Lord Tennyson
'Break Break Break' he said 'by the foot of thy crags o sea' then he broke down and cryed.
It had been so long now since Francis died of a tragic S+M accident but Arthur had never gotten over it sure he had other boyfriends but it wasnt the same. For a whilehe dated Antonio Carriasdgk; Fernando but despite the good times they shared it had never be the same. Now he was in Cornwell and allhe could think was he was going to throw himself in the sea.
'Yes ' he said to himself 'Yes I must do it. This charadethis meaningless prancing about of my mortal coil my twisted and turned humanity my fingernaisl even this dirt underneath them is real, for what am I but mud? I cannot go on anymore notwithoul Francis oh why did he die oh why oh why oh why oh why 'he repeated the phrase like a holy prayer
He got up suddenly and pointed atthe sky 'IT IS YOU OH CRUEL GOD IT IS YOU WHO TOOK MY FRANCIS AWAY FROM ME' then he collapsed on the rocks.
When he collapsed all was silent the ocean haeved liek breasts the rocks jutted into his palms. He moaned and groaned. The ocean swirled suddenly and for a moment it seemed that something was magical in the air, because yes indeed magic was happening. Beautiful colored mists swirledon the sea. The fishes lept and played in the shallows. The moon sung silently and whispred 'Arthur Arthur Arthur awake'. Arthur awoke.
'WHOM CALLS' he shouted, receving no reply but that of the lonely nymph echo was if he was Narsisus himself.
Suddenly he saw a shadowy figure 'WHo is it?' he asked, scared pulling his old tweed sportcoat about him 'Who comes there.'
'Arthuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuur' said a ghostly voice
It came closer and closer. Arthur screamed.
'Arrrrthuuuurrrr!!!' demanded the ghost
'Nooooooooo'
'Arthur you must listen!!!!' said the ghost
'No no I shan't I won't!' demened Arthur he was going out of his head
'Don' t you reocgnise me' said the ghost rather sadly and then he sat down with his head in his transparent hands and cryed.
'... Francis?' said Artie 'Francis?'
'I forswear it so' said the ghost 'Tis me'
'FRANCIS!1!!' ARTIE SCRAEMED WITH JOY
'Hush my nymph' said Francis ' Speak not so loud for you will awake damons'
'How can this be' said Artie 'For you died some miles from here can ghosts travel?'
'No Arthur it is just that ' said Francis 'For you must know they lied to you I never died from asphyxiation my love I was murdered'
'It cannot be ' said Artie aghost
'Yes' said Francis' HO now! For I will tell you the tale of my mighty demise!'
Fo r the next three hours Francis told ARthur the tale. Arthur fell himself more and more in love with this phantom that had once been his only true love.
The tale was a maddening tale of blood and guilt! Francis told how one night in the pub he had been approached by a shadowy man who had not given his name but had told Francis many government secrets.THen the Man had taken Francis to a greatmansion where he fed him grapes. But everything had been kept dak but at one point the lights came on by aiccident and Francis saw the man's face and he his identity! The man saw and plunged a knife into Francis' heart!'
'WHO WSA IT' demened Artie 'I WILL FIND THIS CRUEL FOE AND SLAUGHTER HIM'
'Oh do be careful' siad Francis
'TELL ME' demened Artie 'I MUST KNOW'
'... Honda Kiku' said Karl
'Noooo' monaed Arthur 'Nooooo'
'Lol' said Francis 'No just joking it was USUK'
'HIM!' said Arthur 'HE WAS ALWYAYS JEALOUS OF OUR SUCCESS!'
'You will never be able to fight him' said Francis
Artie remembered how after Francis died USUK had come top of the kink meme his sucess was metoric it was almost unbelieve and now he knew why because he could no longer go on after Francis death they had taken away their main competiton
'I will find him' Artie vowed 'I will show no mercy'
THen he ran away.
USUK was sleeping in his bed. Cocaine and whores where everywhere.
Arthurslipped in. HE put an asp in the bed. USUK never awoke.
That night Artie went back to the ocean to wait for Francis. He called out his name endlessly again he shouted insults at the heavens ffresh as amurderer. But there wa snoreply. Francis never came. FOr days he never came.
Then one night it all changed. Arthur had fallen into a deep slumber. Franciss ghost again came tohim.
ARTHUUUUUUUR ARTHUUUUUUUUUUUUUr
FRANCIS said Arthur 'Francis?'
Then he looked down . A swan sat at his feet. 'For this one night I am a mochi so we may make love' said Francis 'Godis kind'
So they had sex a lot but when the moonlight touched Francissfolds he disipated.
Night after night the same happened. Often Artie would lie in his loves folds. He loved him sooooo much. However one night something different happened Artie had cunninlgy brought with him a special moonstone.As Francis was asleep he rubbed it allover his folds. LO AND BEHOLD SUDDENLY THEY TURNED INTO THE LIMBS OF A MAN.
Oh FrancisOH fRANCIS' Artie said with anticipation 'Now we will always be together'
The magick spread from Francis’ feet to his face Artie couldn't contain his excitment he came everywhere.
Finally it was Francis’ face turn. Artie calpped his hands with delight. HE could not wait.
BUT A TERRIBLE SIGHT STRUCK HIM. FOR IT WAS NOT FRANCIS FACE THAT GREETEDHIm.
itwas..
USUK.
'You die you insult of a dogs limb you camels toe you hounds hoof' said US and iwth that he plunged a mighty knife into Artie's heart.
As his body floated away on the waves, all the ocean wept.
Author/Artist:
pt_sock_acctCharacter(s) or Pairing(s): FRUK, America
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Mention of deth and murder! also sexxorz
Summary: Ather meets Frence's ghost
i'm new and i LOOOOOOOVE fruk!! my friend just sent me their youtube videos what a waster a few days ago!! i dont like much else countries hmm lets think i love china, russia and i love romeano. i also TOTALLY LOVE HERR GERMANY cuz my dad is a huge fan. neway i knowu guyz may not apparecate china/russia slash lol so ive written something for u all!
it is called 'die mine enemy' and it is about fruk. enjoy!11
oh and im sorry about my spelling cuz i kind of alwys get excited near the end of my stories and i dont haev a beta! and if any of u guysz like lotr fic u should check out my other work!neway im gonna write lotsmore about this i may even write a sequel so hey its nice to meet you all!
Arthur sat by the ocean and looked at the stars. He recited apoem by Lord Tennyson
'Break Break Break' he said 'by the foot of thy crags o sea' then he broke down and cryed.
It had been so long now since Francis died of a tragic S+M accident but Arthur had never gotten over it sure he had other boyfriends but it wasnt the same. For a whilehe dated Antonio Carriasdgk; Fernando but despite the good times they shared it had never be the same. Now he was in Cornwell and allhe could think was he was going to throw himself in the sea.
'Yes ' he said to himself 'Yes I must do it. This charadethis meaningless prancing about of my mortal coil my twisted and turned humanity my fingernaisl even this dirt underneath them is real, for what am I but mud? I cannot go on anymore notwithoul Francis oh why did he die oh why oh why oh why oh why 'he repeated the phrase like a holy prayer
He got up suddenly and pointed atthe sky 'IT IS YOU OH CRUEL GOD IT IS YOU WHO TOOK MY FRANCIS AWAY FROM ME' then he collapsed on the rocks.
When he collapsed all was silent the ocean haeved liek breasts the rocks jutted into his palms. He moaned and groaned. The ocean swirled suddenly and for a moment it seemed that something was magical in the air, because yes indeed magic was happening. Beautiful colored mists swirledon the sea. The fishes lept and played in the shallows. The moon sung silently and whispred 'Arthur Arthur Arthur awake'. Arthur awoke.
'WHOM CALLS' he shouted, receving no reply but that of the lonely nymph echo was if he was Narsisus himself.
Suddenly he saw a shadowy figure 'WHo is it?' he asked, scared pulling his old tweed sportcoat about him 'Who comes there.'
'Arthuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuur' said a ghostly voice
It came closer and closer. Arthur screamed.
'Arrrrthuuuurrrr!!!' demanded the ghost
'Nooooooooo'
'Arthur you must listen!!!!' said the ghost
'No no I shan't I won't!' demened Arthur he was going out of his head
'Don' t you reocgnise me' said the ghost rather sadly and then he sat down with his head in his transparent hands and cryed.
'... Francis?' said Artie 'Francis?'
'I forswear it so' said the ghost 'Tis me'
'FRANCIS!1!!' ARTIE SCRAEMED WITH JOY
'Hush my nymph' said Francis ' Speak not so loud for you will awake damons'
'How can this be' said Artie 'For you died some miles from here can ghosts travel?'
'No Arthur it is just that ' said Francis 'For you must know they lied to you I never died from asphyxiation my love I was murdered'
'It cannot be ' said Artie aghost
'Yes' said Francis' HO now! For I will tell you the tale of my mighty demise!'
Fo r the next three hours Francis told ARthur the tale. Arthur fell himself more and more in love with this phantom that had once been his only true love.
The tale was a maddening tale of blood and guilt! Francis told how one night in the pub he had been approached by a shadowy man who had not given his name but had told Francis many government secrets.THen the Man had taken Francis to a greatmansion where he fed him grapes. But everything had been kept dak but at one point the lights came on by aiccident and Francis saw the man's face and he his identity! The man saw and plunged a knife into Francis' heart!'
'WHO WSA IT' demened Artie 'I WILL FIND THIS CRUEL FOE AND SLAUGHTER HIM'
'Oh do be careful' siad Francis
'TELL ME' demened Artie 'I MUST KNOW'
'... Honda Kiku' said Karl
'Noooo' monaed Arthur 'Nooooo'
'Lol' said Francis 'No just joking it was USUK'
'HIM!' said Arthur 'HE WAS ALWYAYS JEALOUS OF OUR SUCCESS!'
'You will never be able to fight him' said Francis
Artie remembered how after Francis died USUK had come top of the kink meme his sucess was metoric it was almost unbelieve and now he knew why because he could no longer go on after Francis death they had taken away their main competiton
'I will find him' Artie vowed 'I will show no mercy'
THen he ran away.
USUK was sleeping in his bed. Cocaine and whores where everywhere.
Arthurslipped in. HE put an asp in the bed. USUK never awoke.
That night Artie went back to the ocean to wait for Francis. He called out his name endlessly again he shouted insults at the heavens ffresh as amurderer. But there wa snoreply. Francis never came. FOr days he never came.
Then one night it all changed. Arthur had fallen into a deep slumber. Franciss ghost again came tohim.
ARTHUUUUUUUR ARTHUUUUUUUUUUUUUr
FRANCIS said Arthur 'Francis?'
Then he looked down . A swan sat at his feet. 'For this one night I am a mochi so we may make love' said Francis 'Godis kind'
So they had sex a lot but when the moonlight touched Francissfolds he disipated.
Night after night the same happened. Often Artie would lie in his loves folds. He loved him sooooo much. However one night something different happened Artie had cunninlgy brought with him a special moonstone.As Francis was asleep he rubbed it allover his folds. LO AND BEHOLD SUDDENLY THEY TURNED INTO THE LIMBS OF A MAN.
Oh FrancisOH fRANCIS' Artie said with anticipation 'Now we will always be together'
The magick spread from Francis’ feet to his face Artie couldn't contain his excitment he came everywhere.
Finally it was Francis’ face turn. Artie calpped his hands with delight. HE could not wait.
BUT A TERRIBLE SIGHT STRUCK HIM. FOR IT WAS NOT FRANCIS FACE THAT GREETEDHIm.
itwas..
USUK.
'You die you insult of a dogs limb you camels toe you hounds hoof' said US and iwth that he plunged a mighty knife into Artie's heart.
As his body floated away on the waves, all the ocean wept.
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A++
Well,
Re: Well,
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I LOVE YOU
I freaking lost it there. You are a mad genius.
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Years of reading uninspired writing have shaped me into being this sort of person. Banal imagery, mediocre characterization, and an overall lack of effort in one too many stories slowly scoured away my enthusiasm for reading fanfiction. I tired of searching in vain for a sparkling gem amongst what seemed like so much rubbish.
Today, however, I saw a glimmer of something; something which went by the name of "Die Mine Enemy".
Going against what experience had taught me, putting aside my dubiety, I took a chance and read.
Not since Tara Gilesbie's "My Immortal" has such a stunning tale of romance, deceit, intensity, and heartbreak been written. Your mastery of language, your impeccable spelling and grammar, and your imagery breathes life into every moment. Your timing between "itwas.." and "USUK", was a superbly clever reference to "Immortal"s memorable "It was...........Dumbledore". I daresay Gilesbie was one of your biggest inspirations.
My dear, feel proud. You possess talent rarely found in this day and age, and you have given me a reason to feel hope in my pursuit of fanfiction once more.
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