ext_308979 ([identity profile] ag3ha.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] hetalia2009-02-21 03:23 pm

[fancomic] B.S.Valentino Continue?

Um, this is my first post.
I read the scanlation version of "Buon San Valentino" and I thought that Germany maybe is really HRE.. The ending is so 'unfinished' and I tried to make the continuation. Note: I only imagine that Germany is HRE. If you know the truth, please DON'T tell me (I hate spoilers).
I know my drawing is bad (most all of them are doodles - I only used a pencil, and I don't like to draw backgrounds..), my english is poor, and the story is suck. If I'm not allowed to post such thing, I'll delete this entry asap. Thanks.

Title: Buon San Valentino - Continue?
Author/Artist: me
Character(s) or Pairing(s): Germany x Italy main; Prussia, Austria, Hungary. Cameo: Turkey, Greece, Japan
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Italy is half-naked, but I think it's safe..
Summary: The continuation of "Buon San Valentino" by Himaruya-sensei

Teaser:



I drew this without seeing the comics so please ignore some errors there :XD: The Chibitalia's costumes are wrong, and I forgot to 'color' Germany's suit ^^;

The worst confession :XD: I don't know how to make a confession scene. Sorry, Germany! ^^; About Italy thinks about their alliance.. I'm not sure if 'alliance' is the right word, but let's pretend that he's talking about their 'friendship' :D

I never ate or cooked pasta before, so forgive me if I'm wrong! Yeah, lack of background, I know.. But I never drew such thing on these strips XD

The (g) part is not necessary, I just wanted to try drawing HRE. My friend told me not to draw the panties, "It'll ruin the scene!!" - and I answer, "See if I care!!" :D
I don't know if Prussia is living with Germany (it seems like Germany is still living with Austria on the original strips..), but I drew him because I wanted to :D I was thinking Prussia wants to accompany him until Austria returns home. (what, it's impossile? XD ) I'm impressed if you know what 'madesu' means..

Sorry for drawing Prussia wearing a girly pajamas!! I just want to see him a little uke sometimes ^^;
About the last scene, Austria has a dinner with Hungary (He thinks "as long as I'm with someone, I'll be fine") and completely forget about his plan consoling Germany..

Chibitalia's past after HRE left. Somewhat I felt like drawing USxUK story on [l] ^^; About "In Vienne", it's completely lie. :D I wanted to draw Italy completely naked at first, but I couldn't do it!! XD

Note about [m]: Italy really thought that HRE's dead but Italy pretended that he's not. Italy then thought that HRE just dumped him (means he's not dead yet). Stupid story, I know :D
On [n], I wanted to draw Germany's dog bites Prussia, but I don't know what it looks like. So it's just a random dog (is it really a dog??)

I laughed when first reading the original strips about the Tomato Ring (I can't imagine how Germany ordered "make it Tomato-shaped, please!" rofl) I wanted to add pasta on the ring, but on the second thought..I want there's something so Germany on it too..
Why did I write "Turkey & Greece", not "Turkey x Greece"? Well, I'm not sure that Turkey celebrates Valentine, so I imagined Japan made a lot of chocolates to sale and Turkey bought some - just for teasing Greece :D

And that's how it ends! Sorry if it's not good.. ^^;
Thanks for reading! ~Ageha

[identity profile] rzncu.livejournal.com 2009-02-21 08:50 am (UTC)(link)
XD LOL sausage tomato ring XDDDD *so edible*
^^ this is awesome~ XD
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[identity profile] kerrin.livejournal.com 2009-02-21 09:06 am (UTC)(link)
I lol'd.

Oh god, I lol'd~ >w<

[identity profile] picarcia.livejournal.com 2009-02-21 09:10 am (UTC)(link)
that was funny... ^^
hahaha madesu, gloomy future, isn't it? 8DDD

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[identity profile] ecchan-disinii.livejournal.com 2009-02-21 09:27 am (UTC)(link)
Haiii orang Indo! 89

I enjoy these comic strips so much kasjdhaskh! And cute drawings, too kasjdhaskh ;___;
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[identity profile] squigglymello.livejournal.com 2009-02-21 09:35 am (UTC)(link)
Oh god, the ring.
Yes.

Love, love, love the omake at the end.

[identity profile] aibachyderu.livejournal.com 2009-02-21 09:36 am (UTC)(link)
oh..indonesian ka?
this is so cuteeee~XDDD..and I love how you put some prussia/austria in :p

[identity profile] xedosarthea.livejournal.com 2009-02-21 10:08 am (UTC)(link)
Awesome work XDD
I enjoyed reading these <3

[identity profile] morgif-kun.livejournal.com 2009-02-21 10:11 am (UTC)(link)
awww this comic is so cute!! ♥

[identity profile] liverdatt.livejournal.com 2009-02-21 10:12 am (UTC)(link)
Oh god, the entire thing is dead hilarious.

[identity profile] random-karen.livejournal.com 2009-02-21 10:17 am (UTC)(link)
I love this. So adorable! Italy's brain made me giggle. XDD Your drawing style really suits the characters!

[identity profile] bipolarbliss.livejournal.com 2009-02-21 10:18 am (UTC)(link)
Ahaha, Germany madesu xD Wah, that's actually kind of befitting (for his love life, at least).


Everything is so cute ♥ I love Turkey in the last panel of the omake.

[identity profile] dorkwind.livejournal.com 2009-02-21 10:22 am (UTC)(link)
Awwww... this was adorable, and I giggled alot. :D

Also, I saw that Nimbus 2000 on the broom Chibitalia was holding. :D

[identity profile] glareola.livejournal.com 2009-02-21 10:51 am (UTC)(link)
YOU ARE MY HERO!
ah... I shouldn't act like a silly fangirl. But... you're a genius, you know? I can't really say anything else, because if I do I'll start acting like a fangirl again.
So... just take my compliments. Please keep drawing fancomics like this. Your ideas are so sweet and funny and detailed and surprising. It's the sweet surprises I love the most.

[identity profile] hikaruchi.livejournal.com 2009-02-21 11:06 am (UTC)(link)
I loved this so much~ Thanks for sharing! ♥ So many cute and amusing things I can't list them all, but please keep on creating fancomics for us all to enjoy. XD

[identity profile] imacatlover.livejournal.com 2009-02-21 11:15 am (UTC)(link)
I LOVED this! The you got all of the characters spot on, and your drawings are so cute (especially HRE) >w< I loved Italy's mind!

[identity profile] ayakohi.livejournal.com 2009-02-21 11:18 am (UTC)(link)
Austria married to whom......?? XD

OMG inside italy's mind... there are still those people who has erogenous hair curls XD AND OMGx2 CUTE HRE XDDD PRUSSIA ASDFASFSADFASDFASDFASDFASFASDF. And I totally remembered the Austria household's reaction when they finally knew that Italia was a boy XD Wtf XD WURST + TOMATO RING HAHAHAHA this is pure genius XDD And a Turkey/Greece omake!! You really draw good 4komas~~ seconded glareola's comment~~ please make more :P

[identity profile] beldarius.livejournal.com 2009-02-21 12:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Ahahaha, oh my god. This is so awesome it should be official. XD

[identity profile] atiko.livejournal.com 2009-02-21 12:05 pm (UTC)(link)
HAHAHA! That was cute - you're really good at yonkoma-style comics (setting up the punchline and everything)!

"I'm married to Prus... I MEAN HUNGARY." cracked me up. :D
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[identity profile] istalk.livejournal.com 2009-02-21 12:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Hell yes, HRE became Germany ^_^
Prussia is awesome xD

[identity profile] iteyoshii.livejournal.com 2009-02-21 01:15 pm (UTC)(link)
OH MY GOD IT MADE MY DAY.

*dance*

and you're Indonesian!!! *hugs*
madesu, loooolll XDDD

ILU, ILU, ILU...!!!!

[identity profile] the-crazy-freak.livejournal.com 2009-02-21 01:18 pm (UTC)(link)
You are my HERO!!! ^///^
Love your idea of the continuation!

There's so much awesome in these comics! Love the little punchlines. xD

[identity profile] ogigia-island.livejournal.com 2009-02-21 01:20 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you for your comic! I enjoyed read these and I loved it so much ♥!
And Prussia and Italy's brain are fantastic!

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