[fancomic] B.S.Valentino Continue?

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Um, this is my first post.
I read the scanlation version of "Buon San Valentino" and I thought that Germany maybe is really HRE.. The ending is so 'unfinished' and I tried to make the continuation. Note: I only imagine that Germany is HRE. If you know the truth, please DON'T tell me (I hate spoilers).
I know my drawing is bad (most all of them are doodles - I only used a pencil, and I don't like to draw backgrounds..), my english is poor, and the story is suck. If I'm not allowed to post such thing, I'll delete this entry asap. Thanks.

Title: Buon San Valentino - Continue?
Author/Artist: me
Character(s) or Pairing(s): Germany x Italy main; Prussia, Austria, Hungary. Cameo: Turkey, Greece, Japan
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Italy is half-naked, but I think it's safe..
Summary: The continuation of "Buon San Valentino" by Himaruya-sensei

Teaser:



I drew this without seeing the comics so please ignore some errors there :XD: The Chibitalia's costumes are wrong, and I forgot to 'color' Germany's suit ^^;

The worst confession :XD: I don't know how to make a confession scene. Sorry, Germany! ^^; About Italy thinks about their alliance.. I'm not sure if 'alliance' is the right word, but let's pretend that he's talking about their 'friendship' :D

I never ate or cooked pasta before, so forgive me if I'm wrong! Yeah, lack of background, I know.. But I never drew such thing on these strips XD

The (g) part is not necessary, I just wanted to try drawing HRE. My friend told me not to draw the panties, "It'll ruin the scene!!" - and I answer, "See if I care!!" :D
I don't know if Prussia is living with Germany (it seems like Germany is still living with Austria on the original strips..), but I drew him because I wanted to :D I was thinking Prussia wants to accompany him until Austria returns home. (what, it's impossile? XD ) I'm impressed if you know what 'madesu' means..

Sorry for drawing Prussia wearing a girly pajamas!! I just want to see him a little uke sometimes ^^;
About the last scene, Austria has a dinner with Hungary (He thinks "as long as I'm with someone, I'll be fine") and completely forget about his plan consoling Germany..

Chibitalia's past after HRE left. Somewhat I felt like drawing USxUK story on [l] ^^; About "In Vienne", it's completely lie. :D I wanted to draw Italy completely naked at first, but I couldn't do it!! XD

Note about [m]: Italy really thought that HRE's dead but Italy pretended that he's not. Italy then thought that HRE just dumped him (means he's not dead yet). Stupid story, I know :D
On [n], I wanted to draw Germany's dog bites Prussia, but I don't know what it looks like. So it's just a random dog (is it really a dog??)

I laughed when first reading the original strips about the Tomato Ring (I can't imagine how Germany ordered "make it Tomato-shaped, please!" rofl) I wanted to add pasta on the ring, but on the second thought..I want there's something so Germany on it too..
Why did I write "Turkey & Greece", not "Turkey x Greece"? Well, I'm not sure that Turkey celebrates Valentine, so I imagined Japan made a lot of chocolates to sale and Turkey bought some - just for teasing Greece :D

And that's how it ends! Sorry if it's not good.. ^^;
Thanks for reading! ~Ageha