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FRIGHT! A taste of a Hetalia Horror manga
Hey Hetalia! Remember me from long ago? I was the one who asked all of you nice people back in March for suggestions on the HetaliaHorror! manga I'm working on.
Thanks to everyone's help, I've managed to get a firm footing in the plot, character design and so forth. So today, I'm finally bringing you a short tidbit as to what the actual manga is like. Granted, I'm not exactly pleased with the way my scanner did these pictures, but, hey, what can you do? Don't tell me they're crappy, as I am already familiar with that, thank you. These were completely done in pecil with no ink, though I plan to re-upload them penned sometime later. I just wanted to get these to everyone as soon as possible so I could get some critique in before I start submitting the comic (which may be in June).
So what are you waiting for? Take a look!!!
Name: Fright!
Artist: Me
Warnings: A bit of language, France, some freaky anthromorphs, France, and mentions/suggestions/display of cannabliism in less than 3 1/2 pages
Rating: Better label this as PG-13 for all of the above
The plot:
England had enough problems to deal with. A stupid wino bastard, an ungrateful brat, things seemed to spiral downward for him day after day. But in an attempt to get back at those who caused him so much misery, he accidentally released a demon from a cursed book upon the nations, who were mutated into beings of horror. Now with it on the loose and chaos ensuing on a global scale, can England stop the madness from getting any farther? Or is he doomed to live in the twisted reality he's unleashed, at least until one of the monstrous nation-horrors decides to silence him forever????
(read right to left, up to down)
I am so sorry for the poor quality. I promise the actual manga will not be such (I should know, it's inked and everything!!).
--
If anyone is interested to know who was casted as what, here is a general overview of their current status:
France as France and his sexy-bad self, who is the victim of numerous bludgeons, mauling and all around basic horrific violence. For an odd reason, it appears that the demon's spell did not affect him and turn him into a monster (same goes for Russia)....
England as the Demonic Clairvoyant. He's gained incredible powers as a result of releasing the bound Demon, but has also gained the unfortunate side effects that come from the paranormal powers. To distinguish his abnormality from others, there is a pentagram located on his chest that burns whenever the Demon is nearby.....
America as the Wendigo. Not much has changed, except now he has the unhealthy appitite for human flesh, 24/7. He is labeled as a Current, meaning that most of his human emotion still exists, thus he is able to make moral-based decisions.
Japan as the Kuchisake-onna, or the Slit-Mouth. He, too, is a Current, but he has become extremely self-conscience about his face and the face his mouth has been slashed open right up to his ears...
Poland as the Rusalka. He's a Current, but he's none too happy about his position. He has to remain wet or else he'll wither away, and as a result, he cannot wear makeup/clothing that is 'cool'. He blames England whenever he can.
Lithuania as the Cat Man, another Current. Honestly, nothing has changed. Lithuania remains to be level-headed and kind, but now has the unexplainable urge to get head-pets.....
Greece as the Minotaur. He' a Current and has the urge to eat human flesh like America, but he's able to better control his urges. He does not see his transformation as 'bad' for in his case, it could be 'worse'.
Prussia as the Zombie Hunter (yes, I know, too much L4D1&2). He is the living dead now, but since when has he not been? Everyone fears that due to his abnormal condition, he will slowly fall from the status of being a Current into becoming a vicious Displaced....
Ukraine as the No-Face. She is a Current but is kept under intensive surveillance due to her inability to tell friend from foe (no face, remember?)
Hungary as the Medusa. She is a Displaced; she can no longer act on her conscience but rather her instinct. That instinct, unfortunately, tells her to kill. She tried to control herself at first yet she lost complete control when she accidentally turned Austria into stone.
Germany as the Krampus. He, like Hungary, is now a Displaced but had tried very hard to fight his cannibalistic urges. Sadly, he failed and took the lives of at least 16 children his monstrous side believed to be naughty, eating every single scrap. He's now locked up and kept under heavy surveillance. It saddens Italy he must be kept this way, but at the state he's in now, Germany will attack anything....
North and South Italy as the Ghost Twins. These Currents may not look frightening now, but that demon's spell has given them incredible powers that can be used when they're together. Romano is currently awaiting news on Spain while the other awaits in hopeful silence that Germany's sanity may return...
The Demon. Status is currently unknown. It is of great and terrible power that is not to be taken lightly. Its true intentions are unclear, although there is a chance that everyone will find out soon if England fails....
Tell me your opinions guys! Good? Bad? Can't see the words? Back to the drawing board for me??? This manga isn't going to be possible unless I can get some proper feedback.
Every comment is loved and appreciated!!!
Edit: For those who are curious about this manga, a pilot chapter was released awhile ago at: http://community.livejournal.com/hetalia/8555427.html
Updates for it's progress are on dA which you can check at: http://sith-chan.deviantart.com/
Thank you~!
Thanks to everyone's help, I've managed to get a firm footing in the plot, character design and so forth. So today, I'm finally bringing you a short tidbit as to what the actual manga is like. Granted, I'm not exactly pleased with the way my scanner did these pictures, but, hey, what can you do? Don't tell me they're crappy, as I am already familiar with that, thank you. These were completely done in pecil with no ink, though I plan to re-upload them penned sometime later. I just wanted to get these to everyone as soon as possible so I could get some critique in before I start submitting the comic (which may be in June).
So what are you waiting for? Take a look!!!
Name: Fright!
Artist: Me
Warnings: A bit of language, France, some freaky anthromorphs, France, and mentions/suggestions/display of cannabliism in less than 3 1/2 pages
Rating: Better label this as PG-13 for all of the above
The plot:
England had enough problems to deal with. A stupid wino bastard, an ungrateful brat, things seemed to spiral downward for him day after day. But in an attempt to get back at those who caused him so much misery, he accidentally released a demon from a cursed book upon the nations, who were mutated into beings of horror. Now with it on the loose and chaos ensuing on a global scale, can England stop the madness from getting any farther? Or is he doomed to live in the twisted reality he's unleashed, at least until one of the monstrous nation-horrors decides to silence him forever????
(read right to left, up to down)
I am so sorry for the poor quality. I promise the actual manga will not be such (I should know, it's inked and everything!!).
--
If anyone is interested to know who was casted as what, here is a general overview of their current status:
France as France and his sexy-bad self, who is the victim of numerous bludgeons, mauling and all around basic horrific violence. For an odd reason, it appears that the demon's spell did not affect him and turn him into a monster (same goes for Russia)....
England as the Demonic Clairvoyant. He's gained incredible powers as a result of releasing the bound Demon, but has also gained the unfortunate side effects that come from the paranormal powers. To distinguish his abnormality from others, there is a pentagram located on his chest that burns whenever the Demon is nearby.....
America as the Wendigo. Not much has changed, except now he has the unhealthy appitite for human flesh, 24/7. He is labeled as a Current, meaning that most of his human emotion still exists, thus he is able to make moral-based decisions.
Japan as the Kuchisake-onna, or the Slit-Mouth. He, too, is a Current, but he has become extremely self-conscience about his face and the face his mouth has been slashed open right up to his ears...
Poland as the Rusalka. He's a Current, but he's none too happy about his position. He has to remain wet or else he'll wither away, and as a result, he cannot wear makeup/clothing that is 'cool'. He blames England whenever he can.
Lithuania as the Cat Man, another Current. Honestly, nothing has changed. Lithuania remains to be level-headed and kind, but now has the unexplainable urge to get head-pets.....
Greece as the Minotaur. He' a Current and has the urge to eat human flesh like America, but he's able to better control his urges. He does not see his transformation as 'bad' for in his case, it could be 'worse'.
Prussia as the Zombie Hunter (yes, I know, too much L4D1&2). He is the living dead now, but since when has he not been? Everyone fears that due to his abnormal condition, he will slowly fall from the status of being a Current into becoming a vicious Displaced....
Ukraine as the No-Face. She is a Current but is kept under intensive surveillance due to her inability to tell friend from foe (no face, remember?)
Hungary as the Medusa. She is a Displaced; she can no longer act on her conscience but rather her instinct. That instinct, unfortunately, tells her to kill. She tried to control herself at first yet she lost complete control when she accidentally turned Austria into stone.
Germany as the Krampus. He, like Hungary, is now a Displaced but had tried very hard to fight his cannibalistic urges. Sadly, he failed and took the lives of at least 16 children his monstrous side believed to be naughty, eating every single scrap. He's now locked up and kept under heavy surveillance. It saddens Italy he must be kept this way, but at the state he's in now, Germany will attack anything....
North and South Italy as the Ghost Twins. These Currents may not look frightening now, but that demon's spell has given them incredible powers that can be used when they're together. Romano is currently awaiting news on Spain while the other awaits in hopeful silence that Germany's sanity may return...
The Demon. Status is currently unknown. It is of great and terrible power that is not to be taken lightly. Its true intentions are unclear, although there is a chance that everyone will find out soon if England fails....
Tell me your opinions guys! Good? Bad? Can't see the words? Back to the drawing board for me??? This manga isn't going to be possible unless I can get some proper feedback.
Every comment is loved and appreciated!!!
Edit: For those who are curious about this manga, a pilot chapter was released awhile ago at: http://community.livejournal.com/hetalia/8555427.html
Updates for it's progress are on dA which you can check at: http://sith-chan.deviantart.com/
Thank you~!