ext_6639 ([identity profile] gileonnen.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] hetalia2008-09-08 11:41 pm
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In class today, I somehow managed to draw France instead of take notes. ^_^;;; At least we were discussing historical events, some of which happened in France?

Artist: [livejournal.com profile] gileonnen
Character: France
Rating: G
Summary: I did eventually color the doodle in Photoshop. Promise!



France

[identity profile] polandlithuania.livejournal.com 2008-09-09 06:54 am (UTC)(link)
I really love prominent-nosed France! And his very France-like expression makes me smile. The colour of the eyes is lovely, too.
Care for concrit?

[identity profile] polandlithuania.livejournal.com 2008-09-09 07:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Hahaha, oh god. Please don't apologize, this is the most awake-putting thing I've heard in years. Woke me up better that a bucket of cold water. I mean that in a good way. I haven't really thought about commenting, and why and how I should do it, for a long time.
It kind of sounds like you understand concrit differently than I do, though. I offer concrit to artists that I like, in the same way that I'd only offer to beta a fic to an author I like.
And the reason you aren't getting comments is probably that your picture is just a head. There isn't usually much you can say about a head, unless something about it just happens to be your fetish area of particular interest, like prominent noses (particularly on France) and just this kind of smug-ish, confident nonchalance are for me. Without that, you can just leave plankton comments like "Wow" or "neat!" or "Awesome" or "^.^" - the kind you feel embarrassed to type and nobody wants to hear anyway.

Well, thank you for trusting my judgement! What I wanted to say was 1) that the distance between the eyes is usually equal to the length of one eye, and 2) that the middle of the nose usually lines up with the middle of the lips. (Reference! http://img73.imageshack.us/my.php?image=petergrahammironovpppcv9.jpg) I tried moving the left (his right, our left) part of his face (including the eye, the eyebrow and the nose, but not touching the lips) more to the right: http://img355.imageshack.us/my.php?image=frgileonnenqb0.jpg . I think this eye distance and position of nose relative to mouth are more natural, and also look really hot. *Ahem* Disregard the hair, though.
The part of the cheek that I circled in red is somewhat unnatural, too. It is too low to be a cheekbone and too high to be that bit of muscle/fat around the lips.
Say, are you drawing this with a mouse?

[identity profile] polandlithuania.livejournal.com 2008-09-09 10:34 pm (UTC)(link)
You drew Russia and I missed it? Indeed I did - drat! I need to go through the community backlog attentively. Who knows how much other awesomeness I've missed!
Yeah! I really want to draw interesting things too! ;A; One of the things I regret most is that I can't come up with plots for pictures when I want to draw them (like, the France/Russia series? I'm stuck. Um. If you have some time to spare, could you perhaps help me with it by writing it for me betaing the probably incredibly purple prose I've written?.. )

Actually I haven't seen most of your art yet. I've yet to browse through your journal, really. Have just discovered your Dumbledore/Grindelwald picture, which is why this comment is taking so long to appear.
Yes, it really is weird how some rules still apply to anime. But I've discovered that there are some proportions I have to keep if I want a drawing to look attractive to me. But these things are apparently really personal - most people seem to have no problem with arms that are so long that the wrist hangs lower than the hips, and I don't like them...
But if you hate drawing in a style, why would you do it? To explore the style and find a variation that you like? Or to "keep true" to the original look of the characters? Or for other reasons?

You have my respect! I myself couldn't dream of colouring anything with a mouse, much less outlining it...

[identity profile] polandlithuania.livejournal.com 2008-09-09 11:40 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh yes, please draw it! I too think it would be very hot and not-boring.

Yeah! When I do get ideas for pictures, they tend to turn into comics. Or weird picture/text combinations.
Thank you so much for agreeing to beta! I've been feeling terribly uncomfortable about asking you to do it.

They're seriously longer? When you're standing, not when you're sitting? Oh wow, I didn't think that happens in real life. Pfft, I wonder why I still thought that. It's not like I haven't lost enough arguments about whether proportions I held to be immutable are merely my own proportions or indeed the golden standard of human anatomy.

"Each style has something to teach" - that's so true! I love learning from styles. I don't think I've ever tried to learn from a style that I'm uncomfortable with using, though. Maybe I should try that.

Yeah, I know how you feel. I've been dreaming about a tablet for the longest time, and then I actually got one for my birthday. Greatest present ever! It's pretty old by now, though, and now I'm dreaming about a new one.

[identity profile] gabriela-gosden.livejournal.com 2008-09-10 12:09 pm (UTC)(link)
♥ I love his smile. Great fanart ^^