http://symbiotific.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] symbiotific.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] hetalia2011-08-03 12:50 am

[Fanfic] Heartstrings 6/?

Title: Heartstrings
Rating: T for now(?)
Genre: Slice-of-life, AU
Characters/Pairings: Alfred, Arthur, ensemble cast | Eventual Alfred/Arthur, with other side pairings
Summary: AU. Arthur Kirkland's too busy to start a relationship. Google's solution: Heartstrings, the new online dating service for the Too Busy. He just didn't think the solution would be so literal.
Chapter summary:
And this is the reason why Arthur Kirkland should never have his phone while he's drunk. Or is it?
Notes: Multi-chaptered collab fic! Updates may be a little slow, but they'll definitely come. Comments and any feedback are always welcome!

 

Chapter 6: Too Drunk )

[identity profile] theladyjazz.livejournal.com 2011-08-05 01:15 pm (UTC)(link)
I love your writing style. You make the story flow so smoothly and the way you write Arthur and Alfred makes them believable as characters. I like that you didn't make Arthur instantly gay because in a lot of fics he is already one from the beginning. I love that he actually gets to explore his sexuality here, like he's not just limited to loving girls but maybe boys (or only Alfred, his one true love ><). Keep writing more! Also, you should post this fic in ff.net You'd get tons of reviews.