ext_171325 ([identity profile] luminousbeat.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] hetalia2008-09-04 04:31 pm

[Fanfiction] Identical Scars

Author: [livejournal.com profile] luminousbeat 
Characters: Russia/Lithuania
Rating: PG
Warnings: Possible OOCness, along with abuse.
Summary: "Toris, do you know why I hurt you?"
A rhetorical question, I knew.

( Identical Scars )


*sweatdrops* Have fun....

[identity profile] ivan-braginsky.livejournal.com 2008-09-04 09:01 pm (UTC)(link)
It's good! A few errors, though-- the "curling smoked" should be "curling smoke", "wack" should be "whack", and "spokem" should be "spoke,". Also, "stinginy" is messed up, "moment's" shouldn't have an aposrophe.



But I did really like <33 I did, I did~

[identity profile] gokunobaka.livejournal.com 2008-09-04 09:13 pm (UTC)(link)
Hawt *_*

I kinda like Russia x Latvia too. So emo *_*
Let poland join next time XD

I think you captured russia tans character well too~