[FANART] "I'm sorry..."

[ran89.livejournal.com]

Winter, snow, gloominess...ok, that's all I guess XD
I just can't get that "cleaning out the storage" strip out of my mind T_T
(Actually this was drawn a week ago, but then I went off on holiday and didn't have the chance to post it)

Title: "I'm sorry...."
Author/Artist: ran89
Character(s) or Pairing(s): US+UK
Rating: G
Warnings: MASSIVE picture (if that could even be classified as a warning...XD)
Summary: Under the snow, unspoken words

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Comments

[arclights.livejournal.com]

Ah, how lovely. ♥ I love the atmosphere. :3

[nataku-kun.livejournal.com]

this is so bittersweet, I love it! I do have a few pieces of criticism about the structure and stuff... but that's just me being overly critical of everything, really.

Incidently, I was listening to the drama cd an hour ago and started crying during track 4 which was the vocal version of the Cleaning out the Storage strip... I can't believe that made me start crying... but it did and I feel like I've gone too far into the fandom... =A=

[ran89.livejournal.com]

Oh please, critcism is always appreciate! XD
At least it helps to improve, even if just a little, i think. So don't hesitate!! XD

Believe me, you're not the only one who cried (or at least wanted to. I was holding back the tears, and it was only because there were people around, otherewise... T_T)

[nataku-kun.livejournal.com]

okay... well... background-wise... I really like how you did the snow but it's a bit too much. It's too cluttered and it doesn't look that natural... I think making spaces wider and making the dots more sparse and spread out is a better way to go. Bigger spaces give the picture a emptier feeling and helps convey the message of unspoken words better because there's a sense of something lingering in the air... at least, that's how I feel. Also, UK's shoulder's a bit too low and his legs are a bit too thin

... that's all for now ^^;;

[ran89.livejournal.com]

Ok; quick criticism, quick reply from the author XD
All the points you've mentioned, I had already noticed after I posted (as usual I always get to understand things late), and while I reckon the background can be changed, unfortunaltely Arthur's shoulders can't... orz

Uhm...legS? this might be me again not quite understanding your point of view and mistaken again, but I assure you that there's only one leg showing XD
It probably seems like both can be seen because of the side seam of his trousers that doesn't quite looks like a seam? XD
But that's only my guessing.

[nataku-kun.livejournal.com]

yeah, the seam... XD okay, the leg's fine... it's just I couldn't tell it's a seam XD;;

[ran89.livejournal.com]

Just as I thought @seam XDDD

[equivalent-t.livejournal.com]

See, I know there's a reason I liked how Al never managed to say 'Thank You' to Arthur in the original strips. XD

Very nice atmosphere you've got here! I like a lot. :D

[haruhara.livejournal.com]

What a lovely piece. :( Dark and light at the same time is a very neat contrast, indeedy.

[starshards.livejournal.com]

Oooooh, that's gorgeous!