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hetalia2011-04-03 09:02 am
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Letter from a Soldier
Title: Letter from a Soldier
Setting: WWII, no specific date
Characters: Alfred Jones/America (acting as the soldier writing the letter), Matthew Williams/Canada (acting as the receiver of the letter and soldier's brother), Arthur Kirkland/England (briefly mentioned as family)
Warnings: Firstly, this is my first fanfic. There is some Psychologically sensitive material regarding WWII. Also, despite the fact that Alfred wrote this, there is a lot of 'graceful' vocabulary and language used in this piece. I felt that this was required in order to bring out the true meaning behind this piece.
Feedback Questions to consider:
1. Did you think someone else could've written this letter? Why? And who would've it been addressed to?
2. Did you feel that the graceful vocabulary could've been adjusted to 'Alfred-standards'? How? (this is a very important question!)
3. Did you feel that the bold italics were distracting or brought more to the piece?
Link: click here
Setting: WWII, no specific date
Characters: Alfred Jones/America (acting as the soldier writing the letter), Matthew Williams/Canada (acting as the receiver of the letter and soldier's brother), Arthur Kirkland/England (briefly mentioned as family)
Warnings: Firstly, this is my first fanfic. There is some Psychologically sensitive material regarding WWII. Also, despite the fact that Alfred wrote this, there is a lot of 'graceful' vocabulary and language used in this piece. I felt that this was required in order to bring out the true meaning behind this piece.
Feedback Questions to consider:
1. Did you think someone else could've written this letter? Why? And who would've it been addressed to?
2. Did you feel that the graceful vocabulary could've been adjusted to 'Alfred-standards'? How? (this is a very important question!)
3. Did you feel that the bold italics were distracting or brought more to the piece?
Link: click here