ext_20624 ([identity profile] youkofujima.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] hetalia2009-02-13 11:04 pm

[doujin] Don't Wait Up 4/?

Ergh, last week has been so busy for me in terms of work that I hadn't had a chance to get bored, much less draw, so this installment is only four pages, and I have to say, pretty badly done, too. TTATT

This is the continuation of the previous three posts that I have done on this subject. You can find the previous pages in Posts #34 (original concept) and on.

I-I guess this counts as a Happy Valentine's Day post?? REALLY? XD;

Also, still trying to fix that problem with Photobucket.
Previous posts:1/2/3/4/5/6/7/8/9/10/11 (doujin)/12/13/14/15/16/17 (slightly NSFW)/18/19 (NSFW)/20/21/22/23/24/25/26/27/29/30/31/32/33/34/35/36/37

Title: Don't Wait Up (I really want to change the title now)
Artist: [livejournal.com profile] youkofujima
Characters/Pairing: America/Russia (+UK)
Rating: PG-13/R
Warnings: Sketchy, yandere Russia, NAKED AMERICA IN THE SHOWER.
Summary: Last we left off, America came home finding Russia having just chugged $60 worth of prescription pain killers. Russia acts like a child caught with his hand in the empty cookie jar and chocolate chips around his lips.

Also, as opposed to translations from my Japanese script into English, I am using my English script.





America: Whatever, I don't care. Do whatever.
Russia: America-kun... *grabs*



Russia: I'm...
Russia: I...
Russia: I feel sick............. *HUUUUUURRLLLLLL*
WTF?!
America: *glasses crack*
Russia: *huuuurrrlll cough*
America: WH--
America: WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING!? (DON'T PUKE ON ME!!)



(Oh god, America's head looks SO SMALL.)

America: Jeez, I can't believe this...
Russia: ... *brushing his teeth*
America: You're not even sorry, are you? Hell--I'm gonna go take a shower.
America: Gimme your scarf later, I gotta wash it.
Russia: ...



*water running*
America: *sighs* I...don't understand a thing going though that guy's head.
UK: "It's best if you let go sooner rather than later."

TBC


Happy Valentine's Day, everyone! (Oh, and happy Friday the 13th)

[identity profile] bubblegumgeisha.livejournal.com 2009-02-13 02:40 pm (UTC)(link)
Yay! Another installment! Wonderfully done as usual. America in shower= ^_^

[identity profile] fanfaluche.livejournal.com 2009-02-13 02:44 pm (UTC)(link)
sdjhsbsvdhvfvsfvg

sorry I can't compute after your posts. xD

Even America has a scar! *even more intrigued*

Buon San Valentino youko! <3 This is the best gift a Russia fan (like me) could ever receive. *รง*

[identity profile] celestesai.livejournal.com 2009-02-13 02:48 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh god so beautiful *A*

Please go on! The pages are lovely so far.

And your anatomy... just wow. *A*

[identity profile] summersoltice.livejournal.com 2009-02-13 02:59 pm (UTC)(link)
oh poor Russia... *pats his back* I guess this is what happens when you pop $60 worth of painkillers

*shudders* it also looks like America has a nasty looking scar too. (Although I do appreciate America in the shower *dabs nose with tissues*)

[identity profile] m-dono.livejournal.com 2009-02-13 03:01 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh you're evil! How could you XDD Do you know how hard it was for me to continue reading? Aaaaaamericaaaaa~~~
Question, is the scar canon?


*looks at America*
Oh my, I think a squirrel found its way to the shower loololo

[identity profile] madhatterarashi.livejournal.com 2009-02-13 03:35 pm (UTC)(link)
*dies because of massive nosebleed*
Ah-ehm...What were we talking about? Oh, yes, about the fact that I'm SO GOING to buy this!

Ouch, poor Russia, in the end all those medicine didn't have a good effect (at least on his stomach ). And America has a scar too? Interesting, interesting!

[identity profile] brainblaster.livejournal.com 2009-02-13 03:38 pm (UTC)(link)
YES
More pages 8D ILY
Ewww puke. D: Poor Russia. (and poor America xDD)

[identity profile] kyora.livejournal.com 2009-02-13 04:02 pm (UTC)(link)
;_____;

CAMERA..... JUST... A BIT.... LOOOWEEERRR. -shot-

[identity profile] naturekid567.livejournal.com 2009-02-13 06:21 pm (UTC)(link)
Hey you got any copies >_>

[identity profile] metallic-sweet.livejournal.com 2009-02-13 04:17 pm (UTC)(link)
Aw, Russia, considering he didn't eat anything with all of those, it's not surprising. You so cute. I take you home and cuddle you til you kill me~

America's scar says a lot of great thing to my muses. They are also demanding 4-inch high-heel boot, but that's another story.

Beautiful art and lovely loveliness as always. :D :D :D

[identity profile] onmyoji-youkai.livejournal.com 2009-02-13 04:31 pm (UTC)(link)
YAY! I just love your comic. I'm a OVER 9000 interested what's going to happen next.

Naked America *u*

[identity profile] psychoxbreaker.livejournal.com 2009-02-13 05:17 pm (UTC)(link)
Wuaaah... When I see the scar, I can't help but think.. "From Japan's blade...? Pearl Harbour..?"

But this is as great as always~! Please ignore the fact that I like having character vomit in every dramatic story I read OTL It's gutwrentching

ILU!

[identity profile] naturekid567.livejournal.com 2009-02-13 06:20 pm (UTC)(link)
WHOOO YAH UPDATE :D

Just great as always.
Oh Russia I feel your pain XP

Can't wait for more.

[identity profile] galaxythrow.livejournal.com 2009-02-13 06:29 pm (UTC)(link)
oh god<3 i love this
fffff america.../shot

[identity profile] x-haphazard-x.livejournal.com 2009-02-13 06:54 pm (UTC)(link)
America's scar = American Civil War?

Looks placed about right -- they did try to tear him in half, after all.

Great pages! Thanks for sharing!

[identity profile] glareola.livejournal.com 2009-02-13 07:00 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, since everyone is guessing around on America's scar I want to throw a guess in too: 9/11
Or where in the timeline are we? sorry, I forgot everything because I just saw a naked man in the shower and it was America!

*shrieks from happiness*

[identity profile] kaitune.livejournal.com 2009-02-13 08:19 pm (UTC)(link)
I really wonder about the scar, is it from one of the wars America had encountered, or is it from living with Ivan??? (Kyaaaaa~)

I somehow start envision Russia joining America in the shower........ Gotta get clean both, eh?

[identity profile] x-haphazard-x.livejournal.com 2009-02-13 08:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Well, Russia's scarf has to get clean somehow, doesn't it?
ext_200955: (russia; vodka~!)

[identity profile] windmilltilter.livejournal.com 2009-02-14 02:48 am (UTC)(link)
I approve of this idea. After all, it would conserve water, right?

[identity profile] fujiappletan.livejournal.com 2009-02-13 08:49 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh England, shush.

Everytime you update my brain explodes in joy.

[identity profile] lo-wah.livejournal.com 2009-02-13 09:22 pm (UTC)(link)
alkja;fja;skfjklas Your ability to draw sexy muscular bodies boggles me. *A*

I love where your mini doujin is going~ For some reason, yandere Russia acting like a child is oddly adorable. |D

[identity profile] myxxym.livejournal.com 2009-02-13 09:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Okay, now that I'm REALLY awake (I read this 4 hours ago, now it's 5 am in the morning), I can give a proper comment. Of incoherency.

DHSADJJASDHJAHSJDJASDJH. SAJHDAHSD. djsjd. *U* *U* *U* I. I still love you. AHHHHH For making my heart burn with the awesome churning out of youuuuu AHHH

WHY RUSSIA. XD WHY. Also, I absolutely adore how you drew Alfred's body in that last page. *u* -watches- And wowww, the scarrr. *u* Guuuuuuuuuuh. *u* -shakes-

[identity profile] doubtless05.livejournal.com 2009-02-13 10:07 pm (UTC)(link)
Hawt US. And I'm seeing a cute Russia here. XD KEEP IT UP~

[identity profile] impishimp.livejournal.com 2009-02-14 12:38 am (UTC)(link)
I love the shower scene XD

[identity profile] drunensis.livejournal.com 2009-02-14 01:24 am (UTC)(link)
America is ripped.

[identity profile] alexielthegreat.livejournal.com 2009-02-14 03:22 am (UTC)(link)
Hhmmmm, that scar.... I'm betting the Civil War. It's right in the middle of him.

Also, FUNNY. I didn't expect Russia to just hoark on him like that. XD Way too funny.

Also, showers are best shared. >////>

[identity profile] mcsourface.livejournal.com 2009-02-14 03:24 am (UTC)(link)
Ulp.
Your Ameria is REALLY sexy. I felt you should know.

[identity profile] inniisfree.livejournal.com 2009-02-14 03:41 am (UTC)(link)
o-ouch...that scar looks painful. Like it opened once and kept reopening and getting bigger T_T

ahh, no wonder Ivan is being yandere. Alfred is showing him now love D:

and I have to agree, your America really is sexy. Not to mention that he has muscles :D He's supposed to be strong but not a lot of people seem to draw him with much muscles

[identity profile] tdei.livejournal.com 2009-02-14 10:18 am (UTC)(link)
*^^* Wickeddd~ Enjoying muchly. Fanservice of showering America is ♥♥ (Scar!!) :DDD

[identity profile] unlock.livejournal.com 2009-02-16 02:43 am (UTC)(link)
I love this story~ ♥

[identity profile] insomniel.livejournal.com 2009-02-16 07:14 am (UTC)(link)
Eagerly awaiting more, this is so awesome LOL.
No pressure!

(Anonymous) 2009-02-17 01:15 pm (UTC)(link)
waitaminute! "gimmy your scarf so i can wash it" hehehe, doesn't he "never take it off"? ;D *to the showers!!*

[identity profile] jasper-child.livejournal.com 2009-07-27 07:54 pm (UTC)(link)
AmericaintheshowerAmericaintheshowerAmericaintheshower! *O*

-twirls-

[identity profile] redbirdrain.livejournal.com 2009-07-31 11:41 pm (UTC)(link)
WOAH I think I see the Great Plains!
(Ugh, I'm terrible).

Kind of an interesting concept, America basically... Looking after a messed-up Russia.