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hetalia2010-07-23 12:26 am
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(Fanfic)
Title: England vs. America
Genre: Family/Friendship
Character(s): England, America
Rating: G
Warnings: None
Summary: A late tribute to the England-America World Cup match. Took me long enough, huh?
one day footballl match. it was england vs america. "you must both play by rules" sayed referee. "ok" sayed america. "ok" sayed the britis, but the britis were make lie. "it is good you have decide to play by rules britis," sayed america, but suddenly england came with swords and tried attacking at american. "april fish !" shouted the britis, "we will never play by rule. hand over world cpu or we kill everyone" everyone was shock at evil britis with their evil plan. suddenly, gmerary came onto the football field. "no england" sayed the germans, "you cannot cheat" so germany got a flame thrower and flamed all britis to a toast. "that is what you get for cheats" sayed germany as everyone celebrate as not britis for the more!
end.
youu think you can get rid of me britis?
hahahaha, i am back!!
i am defender of frnac
Genre: Family/Friendship
Character(s): England, America
Rating: G
Warnings: None
Summary: A late tribute to the England-America World Cup match. Took me long enough, huh?
one day footballl match. it was england vs america. "you must both play by rules" sayed referee. "ok" sayed america. "ok" sayed the britis, but the britis were make lie. "it is good you have decide to play by rules britis," sayed america, but suddenly england came with swords and tried attacking at american. "april fish !" shouted the britis, "we will never play by rule. hand over world cpu or we kill everyone" everyone was shock at evil britis with their evil plan. suddenly, gmerary came onto the football field. "no england" sayed the germans, "you cannot cheat" so germany got a flame thrower and flamed all britis to a toast. "that is what you get for cheats" sayed germany as everyone celebrate as not britis for the more!
end.
youu think you can get rid of me britis?
hahahaha, i am back!!
i am defender of frnac
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Sorry if that's kind of harsh, but the spelling is awful, it's OOC and....short. And plotless. I guess? Idk. I can't really take it seriously.
Speaking of bad grammar, wtf self.
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But if I was grading it, I'd dock some points because you didn't have America drive a Dodge Challenger.
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Sorry, it must be said ^^'
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the greatest piece of literature I have ever read
[gives Pulitzer prize]
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i hav a flametrhower
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also churchhill was frenhc
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britis here to say
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we britis!
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hand over world cpu
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dumb britis
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and i thnk u mean "britis team suk"
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all france are the cheer germanny because england evil and england suck. germany greatest coutnry
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germany suk britis best coutnry hahahaha
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they become toast. that's what they get for cheats
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I'm sorry, but you are invading this community too? Can you please stop? What you are doing is just...
Forget it. I cannot say what I want in writing. But this is truly annoying to us who want to read fanfiction.
(And before you ask, yes I am "britis", at least half. And damn proud of it.)
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