http://parijienne.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] parijienne.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] hetalia2010-02-13 03:04 pm

[Fanfic] Punishment

Title: Punishment
Author: Me
Genre: Uhh...Romantic Comedy? I seriously don't know.
Pairing(s): Prussia/America
Rating/Warnings: T for language
Summary: Since America was late to the world conference, he's forced to go up to Prussia and kiss him.

( Right over here on FF.net )

crossposted to [livejournal.com profile] awesome_hero

[identity profile] okok.livejournal.com 2010-02-14 12:31 am (UTC)(link)
I'm just gonna leave a comment here since I don't have a FF.net account

Anyhow,

Prussia/America tee hee ♥

That was so cute. And funny. And idk I suck at commenting, but I enjoyed it immensely. ♥♥♥

[identity profile] desearu.livejournal.com 2010-02-14 04:34 am (UTC)(link)
OMG! I didn't even know the pairing and it's probably nothing for me (since I like America with England and Prussia with Russia). But I just LOVED this fic! For my likings you could write more of this pairing. <3 (I will check your former works later. Chrchr.)

God, I don't know what to write - usually I list the scenes I loved most, but I loved ANY SINGLE scene of this (way too) short story. I love what the others say to convince him, how he steps towards Prussia, what he thinks about the red eyes, how he tries to say something, how Prussia reacts, how America reacts to Prussia's reaction, "That's my line, you whore", "Pfft, idiot.". <3 Your Prussia is awesome! (Hopefully I'll find some other fics with him in your journal!) And your America is adorable.

AMAZING! <3

[identity profile] desearu.livejournal.com 2010-02-14 09:08 pm (UTC)(link)
You're welcome. <3

I am looking forward to. X3

[identity profile] rfienneslover.livejournal.com 2010-02-15 01:05 am (UTC)(link)
Yes! Thank you! There is simply not enough of these two together.