[fanfic] Revolution Two: Down in Flames (1/1)

[zprussialy.livejournal.com]

Title: Revolution Two: Down in Flames
Author: zPrussialy (stringcatZ)
Rating: PG-13
Characters: Prussia, Russia
Warnings: umm... a lot of violence, nothing else really
Summary: The sequel to my fanfiction, Revolution Two, from Gilbert's point of view. Gilbert stays behind in an attempt to let his friends escape, and ends up setting up a bomb in the Moscow prison. He only has minutes to escape before he goes down along with the building...

Here it is on Fanfiction.net

And Revolution Two, which you might wanna read before this :)

Comments

After I took out those guards (I think there were twelve of them. I’m awesome.)

[prussiablue.livejournal.com]

UH!! I've been waiting for this so long!! >____<
Damn, I can tell you! Although I knew part one and that Gilbert would (most likely, since it wasn't 100% clear!) escape, I sat in front of my PC and... was like "Go! RunrunrunRUN!! Damnit!"
Really! You did a nice job here, Gilbert's POV is easy to recognise - even if I hadn't known that it was his POV (the amount of AWESOME gives some hints xD)
only thing I want to know: why did Ivan stop fighting back?

LOVED this: After I took out those guards (I think there were twelve of them. I’m awesome.)
so GIlbert xD

Re: After I took out those guards (I think there were twelve of them. I’m awesome.)

[zprussialy.livejournal.com]

Haha, writing Gilbert's POV is definitely fun~

Oh, yeah, I probably wasn't too clear about that. He stopped fighting back because he was too hurt to, so Gilbert ran away

I really hate when I have writer's block, this took WAY too long to finish *sigh*

Re: After I took out those guards (I think there were twelve of them. I’m awesome.)

[prussiablue.livejournal.com]

It IS! I can confirm that xD

Ah, damn xD (the not-so-secret Ivan/Gilbert-shipper in me came up with a conspiracy... that Ivan wanted Gilbert to escape xD but the bigger part of my inner self was like "You don't REALLY think that, do you? >.>" And I was like "... no..." xD shizophrenia is great! xD")

It's ok!! Since it's finished NOW! =3

Re: After I took out those guards (I think there were twelve of them. I’m awesome.)

[zprussialy.livejournal.com]

Okay, first, your icon is amazing.

Second, haha, evil I'm-gonna-kill-everyone Russia would TOTALLY let Gilbert escape!

...not.

XD

Re: After I took out those guards (I think there were twelve of them. I’m awesome.)

[prussiablue.livejournal.com]

Thank you =)

Ivan's not evil. Not... quite... he's just a bit... twisted...? xD"

Re: After I took out those guards (I think there were twelve of them. I’m awesome.)

[zprussialy.livejournal.com]

Oh, hey, and do you mind if I add you to my friends?

Re: After I took out those guards (I think there were twelve of them. I’m awesome.)

[prussiablue.livejournal.com]

Of course you can add me =) That'll make you my... 4th? or 5th friend on LJ xD (I feel so lonely... xD")

Re: After I took out those guards (I think there were twelve of them. I’m awesome.)

[zprussialy.livejournal.com]

Hahaha, and this'd make you my 3rd friend! (I'm always lonely lol)

Re: After I took out those guards (I think there were twelve of them. I’m awesome.)

[prussiablue.livejournal.com]

Let's be lonely together =)