[fic] this is how the story goes (america/vietnam)

[miaoujones.livejournal.com]

TITLE: This is How the Story Goes
AUTHOR: Miaou Jones
CHARACTERS: Vietnam, America
RATING: K
NOTES: Written for sirvalkyrie, for The Second Rare Ship Swap.

A girl and a boy are watching fireworks on the Han River. That is how the story starts.

That is not how the story starts, not really. And he is not exactly a boy, and she is not exactly a girl. (Like all good stories, this one is true, and it is also not true.)

[Thanks for reading, if you do!]

Comments

[crayonfishy.livejournal.com]

Wow! Your writing style is so smooth and flowing and poetic. The beginning and the ending phrases were really perfect-- they "book-ended" the story quite nicely, I must say. Overall, it was just beautiful :"D.

[miaoujones.livejournal.com]

Ah, I'm really happy you enjoyed it! Especially the opening/ending phrase: it came to me as I was jotting down notes, and that's when I knew I had the story. Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to comment. :)

[crayonfishy.livejournal.com]

You're welcome! :)