I like this, I seriously like this. It's exciting, and interesting--the introduction itself it gives off a lot of backbone which doesn't make it boring. And the fact that there's a possibility of more gets me of the edge of my seat c:
My only critique is BETA I suppose, I only found one typo, and I advice not to be repetitive (you typed counter twice in one sentence)--it's easy to ask to find a BETA, just ask c: but over all I'm really excited about this and do hope you continue with it! It's exciting c:
BTW! There's a Germany/Romano/Prussia comm! community.livejournal.com/potatovstomato/
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I like this, I seriously like this. It's exciting, and interesting--the introduction itself it gives off a lot of backbone which doesn't make it boring. And the fact that there's a possibility of more gets me of the edge of my seat c:
My only critique is BETA I suppose, I only found one typo, and I advice not to be repetitive (you typed counter twice in one sentence)--it's easy to ask to find a BETA, just ask c: but over all I'm really excited about this and do hope you continue with it! It's exciting c:
BTW! There's a Germany/Romano/Prussia comm!
community.livejournal.com/potatovstomato/