Oh, WOW! That was fantastic! The ending was perfect, oh god - maybe it was because I was so caught up in the hotness, but it never crossed my mind that Spain was just proving S. Italy wrong...
This is actually one of my favorite pairings! And you did such a fantastic job with them - the spanish peppered throughout really is a nice touch. :D You got their personalities down pat, too.
(Also, your english is really quite good - all I could really find is "If Antonio had frozen already, he now seemed maid of stone." --> "maid" should be "made". Damn homophones.)
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This is actually one of my favorite pairings! And you did such a fantastic job with them - the spanish peppered throughout really is a nice touch. :D You got their personalities down pat, too.
(Also, your english is really quite good - all I could really find is "If Antonio had frozen already, he now seemed maid of stone." --> "maid" should be "made". Damn homophones.)
Thanks for this great fic! 8D